Archive for the ‘Writing’ Category

Watching the World Change

October 28, 2019

When I was a kid, I would watch for gray winter skies and wonder if school would be closed for a snow day. The kids in my part of the world watch for gray autumn skies and wonder if school will be closed for a fire day. Even if the fire spares your town here, your area might be under mandatory evacuation, the power may be cut off or the air quality may be too hazardous to go outside. I’m watching the world change in real time and in ways I never imagined.

Since there is nothing I can do about the fires, I’m spending my non-worrying time figuring out how to use these changes to expand my writing. Perhaps I’ll try a bit of historical fiction, as I think I have a better grasp of the dread an ancient Kievan peasant might have felt looking at the growing cloud on the eastern horizon, wondering if it were a storm or the khan’s cavalry invading the land.

Luck and wisdom!

My Vision, My Opinion, My Fiction

October 21, 2019

I ran across two notions about vision and opinion this week – “no self-respecting animal moves before it looks” (Kay Hogan) and “whenever you go someplace, you not only see the environment, but you develop an opinion about it” (Camille Minichino). The first comes from a teacher of The Alexander Technique, a method to retrain the body into healthier posture and movement. The second is from a prolific writer and teacher who was explaining how to give the reader more information while building suspense. Since I’m not the kind of writer who wants to explore dysfunctional characters, I am delighted to have these comments in my toolbox. I like both my heroines and villains to be rational, sensible, and ultimately concerned with the common good. The idea of moving from what you think you see to what actually exists is more interesting to me than trying to fight ultimate evil. Either/or situations usually lead to never-ending conflict, while trying to be of the most benefit to the most people holds the promise of cooperation. While I tell my friends it is a very good thing indeed that I am not Queen of the Universe because the bloodbath would be appalling, I don’t really want to wreak havoc. Violence only produces resentment, resistance, and another round of purges. Cooperation requires hard work to find common ground, which promotes understanding, which can lead to compassion. That’s where hope lies. So, while I will use the first impressions of my protagonist to give the reader information, I’m think in order to make the character change, learn, and grow I will focus on expanding her vision and modifying her opinion.

Luck and wisdom!

A Turning Point That Wasn’t

October 16, 2019

Last year at a memoir-writing workshop I wrote an outline of turning points in my life. This past week I was reminded of a career path I didn’t take and how grateful I am for that. When I graduated from college, I considered applying to the State Department. My father – a long-time civil servant – sorta kinda maybe talked me out of it. I found a different job, didn’t like it, moved to another city, married, moved across country, and discovered quilting. The brilliant career I dreamed of never materialized, but I’ve made art, contributed to my community, and even co-authored a series of sci fi novels (shameless self-promotion, you can buy the latest one here). Not too shabby, all things considered.

Whenever I wonder about the life I might have had, I remember 1979 and the hostage crisis in Tehran. Bruce Laingen (pictured above) was stationed there, the highest-ranking diplomat among the 52 U.S. Embassy workers held in Iran for 444 days. He was also a graduate of my alma mater, Saint Olaf College. In my imagination, I could see myself getting sent to Iran for my first posting, maybe even meeting Laingen at an embassy function and mentioning that I too was an Ole grad. Then the revolution would come, and I would be running for my life. That’s when I breathe a prayer of thankfulness for my (relatively) calm and peaceful existence.

Laingen died recently at age 96. He grew up on a Minnesota farm, interrupted his education to serve his country in World War II, then returned to complete his degree before continuing his service in government. The Iranian hostage crisis brought him to the world’s attention, and he responded with dignity, calm, and presence. He earned every bit of respect due him. I am very grateful to Laingen for showing America at its best.

Luck and wisdom!

Eve’s Requiem and Me

October 14, 2019

 

A few years ago, Spider Road Press published one of my short stories in Eve’s Requiem: Tales of Women, Mystery, and Horror. I made an art quilt to commemorate the event (my story is called “The Family Tree”). The anthology must still be doing well, because on October 10 Spider Road Press offered an Instagram giveaway for those submitting their favorite quote or image from the book. Given that it is Halloween month, if you want to indulge in some spooky stories check out Eve’s Requiem (now with a new cover).

Luck and wisdom!

Just Be

October 7, 2019

I volunteered to work a two-day fundraiser. I left my phone in my purse, didn’t bring a book, and brought a notepad that really was meant for short notes related to the event. “Self,” I said, “just be there. Your other obligations can wait.”

Turns out I gave myself good advice. The other volunteers also decided to focus on the event, so when we did have a lull we actually talked to each other. Given that we were all writers, a few ideas that could lead to short stories popped up (which I dutifully wrote down in the ledger notebook – I know better than to trust I’ll remember good ideas!). That was an extra gift. The real benefit was in being present, paying attention, and slowing down. Give yourself that gift this week if you can, and if not now later in the month. You’re worth the time.

Luck and wisdom!

The Red Toothbrush

September 30, 2019

I try to use color to subtly inform the reader. When I describe what my characters are wearing, I want the reader to instinctively appreciate their moods, backgrounds, and self-images by the colors the characters put on their bodies. Then I bought a red toothbrush and realized I am missing a splendid opportunity.

If you look at my fabric stash, you’ll see lots of pinks, purples, blues, yellows, and greens. If you look in my closet, you’ll see lots of purples, blues, and greens. If you look at my dishes and pottery, you’ll see lots of blues. One could be forgiven for thinking I am a spring and floral kind of gal, with a calm, soft personality.

That’s not how I see myself.

While I love all colors (yes, even orange), if I have a chance to buy a red accessory I’m all over it. I have red purses and tote bags, red shoes, a red wallet, red pens (both red in ink and red in case), and a red pouch to hold cough drops in my red purse. I even have a red hat.

Having realized that I could expand my descriptions, now I have to decide which of my characters will have a revelation while brushing his or her teeth, and what color that toothbrush will be.

Luck and wisdom!

Spelling, The Writer’s Obstacle Course

September 23, 2019

My toys

Spelling usually isn’t an issue for me, but lately I’ve been seeing more of those little red squiggly lines under words in my text documents. At first I blamed spellcheck. For reasons I still can’t understand, it was set to British spelling for a long time. Once I switched that over, I noticed I was having trouble with which compound words could be hyphenated, which should be, and which could go either way. This may be a problem I throw money at by hiring a top-notch proofreader (or at least as top-notch as I can afford).

This has started to take a toll on my confidence. For instance, I was thinking of the word kaleidoscope, and decided to type it on the screen. Sure enough, my first attempt failed (I used two e’s instead of two o’s). I’m not quite to the point that I’ll be giving myself spelling tests, but I may be spending a little more time with the dictionary.

The reward for getting a kaleidoscope (and spelling it properly)

Luck and wisdom!

Where The Stories Are

September 16, 2019

I’m reading The Bastard Brigade by Sam Kean. The book is about the creation of the atomic bomb, and the efforts by each side in World War II to stop the other from getting there first. I’ve read some of that history from the Allied side, but not so much from the Nazi side. Kean is an engaging writer, and gives the reader a wonderful grounding in the people involved in the events. He starts his book with a character I first read about in a short story by Rick Wilber in Asimov’s Science Fiction. Moe Berg was a baseball player, polyglot, and spy. Wilber used him in several alternate history short stories (he now has a book, The Moe Berg Episodes).

I vaguely remembered that Berg was a real person whose history inspired Wilber, which I can understand now that I’ve read Kean’s book. It reinforces the advice I’ve read (and give!) that stories are everywhere. Whether you write fiction or non-fiction, life will bring you treasures if you take the time to look. Little known characters from history can make fabulous protagonists; snatches of overheard conversation can give you the opening line to a new short story; the kerfuffle in the supermarket check-out line can be the springboard for the plot of a 3-volume novel. Keep your eyes and ears open, because the stories are out there, waiting for you.

Luck and wisdom!

Pain and Plot

September 9, 2019

I come from a family that is blessed with unusual health. My mother has never had a backache or a headache, rarely catches cold, and manages what few aches or pains she might experience with a brisk walk and a wry joke. I’m not quite that lucky, but still the gods have been kind to me. The downside of my good fortune is I can be completely oblivious to how pain can debilitate a person, how chronic illness can upend a schedule, how managing medication can consume one’s time. I mention this because what a character doesn’t experience can become a plot point. What if your character insists on driving 400 miles straight through, never realizing that at the end of the trip his shy companion with the bad back will be bedridden for days? What if your character who routinely shrugs off colds neglects to ask if the cancer patient she is interviewing can tolerate another medical stress? Don’t forget the opportunity for character development if your heretofore healthy protagonist suddenly develops shingles.

Luck and wisdom!

Words

September 2, 2019

I understand there’s a statue to Benedict Arnold in London, where he’s considered a patriot instead of a traitor. That got me thinking about perception, and that got me thinking about words. I’m amazed (sometimes delighted) to see how they change over the years. Watch any older sci fi movie and notice how fantastic means bizarre, outlandish, unbelievable. Read news reports from any time of social upheaval and observe which notions that are now mainstream were considered radical then. All of which leads me to my shelf of dictionaries, thesauruses, and other word collections. Usually I grab at them in desperation, then forget them until the next time the words won’t come (or worse yet, the wrong words come in abundance). This is not the respect these treasures deserve. Today is Labor Day, so let us spare a kind thought for the hard-working words we love so much.

Luck and wisdom!